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Waiting by ~acelyn:iconacelyn:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


It seems to me, that I have waited.
Waited so long to meet you,
So long to hold you,
To kiss you,
To love you.

And now that I have,
Every second apart
Feels like forever.

It seems to me, that you have waited.
Waited so long to meet me,
So long to touch me,
To taste me,
To love me.

And now that you have,
Every second apart
Feels like forever.
©2008 ~acelyn
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Submitted: May 12
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I tried to go for a very honest type of a feeling. I wanted to convey the emotions in a very raw form. I usualy try to make everything very... formal, fancy, and sometimes somewhat hard to relate to with the large words I use, but this, I want people to be able to relate with the true feelings portrayed here. There is no "deeper" meaning. It is what it is. The rawness shows the true edge of what poetry can be.

I hope you like it.

<3

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=aj-chan:iconaj-chan: May 12, 2008, 5:35:44 PM
Aww...you really have conveyed the raw emotions here. Even if it's simple, it's still powerful. I love it lots. ^_^
~acelyn:iconacelyn: May 12, 2008, 5:37:23 PM
Yay. Thank you.
That means lots coming from you~

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